Muse bit us

Sep. 7th, 2004 10:06 pm
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We've figured out how to write a complete scene; one that the reader might, hopefully, understand. Make a list of "Who, What, When, Where, Why, How" and then fill it in. And boom, you have a scene. Er, that sounds like a line from one of those stupid paid programming shows. Plus, it organizes our thoughts so we don't confused about what we're trying to accomplish. And the funny thing about this is that our father always been bugs us about that stuff and in typical Chang manner, we've been so stubborn about not doing that. Well he hasn't wanted us to create a list Persia, but he's always emphasizing that we answer those questions in our writing.
heart1e55m00mba: (Path_oxymoronassoc)
Okay so here's the last piece that we haven't posted yet (the others being "Sleep," "Hero's Journey," and "Thoughts After the Bugger War"). Hope you enjoy.

Rooftop Thoughts )

Grr...

Jan. 7th, 2004 08:16 pm
heart1e55m00mba: (Path_oxymoronassoc)
Our writing is all becoming the same thing, and that's kind of bad when you want to show growth. We've already written a piece on a crazy guy and here we are writing another one. Meep. Only the second piece, the guy is outside not inside. It's actually not that bad now that we think about it, aside from the fact that we're making him a bit...odd. We blame it on One Flew Over the Cuckoos' Nest (the book we're reading now).

Anyways here are the other two pieces that we haven't really posted yet that we're going to be turning in.

Hero's Journey )

and

Thoughts After the Bugger War )

And we'll post the one we're working on now later.

ETA
We just realized that we're doing it again. "It" being writing a piece that can kind of be seen as criticizing society and the way most people think. Yeah, we're probably thinking too highly of ourself, but whatever.
heart1e55m00mba: (Squall_iconsomnia)
We got people to look at it during school, so we redid it.

Sleep (revised) )

Comments? Questions? Anybody out there?
heart1e55m00mba: (Path_oxymoronassoc)
This is just a thing that we came up with during creative writing class in fifteen minutes and then later worked on (also in creative writing class). We think our mood and finishing The Perks of Being a Wallflower affected this a little too much. It's also kind of fits as Duo's thoughts in "A Vagabond's Smile." Or at least we think so. Please feel free to comment if you have anything that could improve it because we might actually use it as one of our pieces that showed our "progress" in the class.

Sleep )

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